At the beginning, the book was fast paced and I read every word.
As pages went by, however, I found that I was glossing over parts and thought
about why I was doing that. I believe that, for me, there was just too much
description of surroundings and history that didn’t need to be there, and not
enough action for a while. The action did pick up again, and it had me holding my
breath at times.
I liked the way the chapters were separated into Kal’s and
Daine’s adventures, Mr. King made it easy to follow each one of them and never
left me wondering just how they got to the next scene.
Hi Janet - many thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my book.
ReplyDeleteI think the points you make are valid and give me some food for thought as I write the second installment.
Dominic H King.